You nailed it…neosoul is fab for a rainy day and warm arms ~
(PS…in my humble opinion, you didn’t need to change your first version. We Westerners don’t really write traditional Haiku anyway (it is so much more than counting), so, 5/7/5 can be switched up and still be called modern haiku, esp. if you stay within 17 syllables or less. Write, tis lovely~)
Thank you so much . I quite agree with you, and almost left it like that cos I had just read an Haiku by Nikki Giovanni and it wasn’t in the usual 5-7-5 layout butI thought to myself, I am no Nikki Giovanni so I better not offend the Haiku and Poetry police Lol. Thanks again for stopping by and glad you enjoyed it. Yep neo-soul on a rainy day perfect in the warm hands of love. Enjoy the rest of your sunday. God bless
nice
Thank you!!! Have a great weekend
same to you..
SAME TO U
nice poem, but doesn’t the first line have six syllables? (Sorry for being that type of person. lol. i do like it as it is)
No that’s ok, I think it has five though, but will check again. Thanks for stopping by and mentioning
corrected it…thanks!!!
Someone’s got MAN on HER mind…
Haha ha you know it
… Hope your weekend is going smooth.
yes, yes thanks
very nice
Thank you!!!
You nailed it…neosoul is fab for a rainy day and warm arms ~
(PS…in my humble opinion, you didn’t need to change your first version. We Westerners don’t really write traditional Haiku anyway (it is so much more than counting), so, 5/7/5 can be switched up and still be called modern haiku, esp. if you stay within 17 syllables or less. Write, tis lovely~)
Thank you so much
. I quite agree with you, and almost left it like that cos I had just read an Haiku by Nikki Giovanni and it wasn’t in the usual 5-7-5 layout butI thought to myself, I am no Nikki Giovanni so I better not offend the Haiku and Poetry police Lol. Thanks again for stopping by and glad you enjoyed it. Yep neo-soul on a rainy day perfect in the warm hands of love. Enjoy the rest of your sunday. God bless
Beautiful Haiku and I still love a few of Sade’s older songs. She’s magical
Oh yea, Sade still got it. Glad you enjoyed it