I like to dance
But I don’t know how
I like to groove
But I don’t know how
I like to move
But I can’t do it alone
I want to dance
Will you show me how?
I want to groove
Will you teach me now?
I want to move
Will you move with me?
I like to dance
But I don’t know how
I want to dance
So I can be in your arms
Show me how
So I can feel your arms
Show me now
With your arms
Around my waist
I want to dance and
Lose myself in your arms
Your warmth and
The magic of your touch
I want to dance
Will you show me how?
Love this and it flows so well.
Thank you :), now if only i could dance like and flow like that lol
Smmoth, sensual flow of verses. Kudos!
Thank you :)! Now to get my dancing to be like that lol
Try writing your poetry while you move around to music without vocals. You may find they intertwine.
I just might try that :), thanks Resa
Another dandy post by Boomie! \m/ 🙂
Cheers!
Thanks always Rahul
Now I feel like dancing. I LOVE to dance!
Nice, I am a terrible dancer or so i have been told…people probably hating on my MJ moves lol
this was cute boomie 🙂
so tender and warm.
Thank you so much 🙂
I like the way it builds up…
Thank you 🙂
I truly love this poem. The art you chose to accompany it is great. The entire piece is a river of movement and magic. Keep up the awesome writing. Thank you for posting this one, I love it.
Thank you Suzie for stopping by and taking time to comment, well appreciated and glad you like this :). Have a great weekend
This is fantastic! i love it.
Thank you so very much. Glad you enjoyed it
Love it. Your flow is smooth. Good to the last drop.
Thank you so very much 🙂
hehe.. i will show you.. nice poem sis
ha ha…thank you 🙂
This is your best so far! Loved it!! 😀
*hugs*
Awww, that’s so kind to say. Thank you!!!
I love the flow of words…… it just flows………..the chosen image also flows with the words… i love it!
Thank you so much Abi, glad you enjoyed it :).
Terrific poem. I like the desire for connecting with a partner and learning from them. A great sensation. As for actual dancing, I appear to have missed out on that particular talent as well. Still, it is the joy of trying, with the proper someone that really matters.
Thank you so much. I just stopped by yours and learnt something new 🙂
I LOVE this poem! So perfect for the Use Me and Abuse Me Day dance party!
Thanks for sharing~
Thanks Susie :).
You write just fine. I dropped in from Susie Landau’s party.
Scott
Thank you so much :). Will be over at yours soon
Found you via Susie’s paaaarty!!
You most certainly CAN write! Actually, this would be good to music. This is the second poem I’ve found today were I’ve thought this. Great work, boomiebol!
Thank you so much :).
I danced on over here from Susie’s blog party and found more great talent. Terrific post.
Thank you so much. I just stopped by yoir blog as well. Very nice of you to stop by and leave such nice comments :).