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Peel away every façade
Pull apart all the pretenses
Let the built up glass walls
Come crashing to the ground
Along with the insecurities
Fears
Hypocrisies and
Deceits
Peel me apart slowly
But surely
Let the façade be gone
Then
Spread your arms of love
Like wings over me
And
Cover me
Cover me in your truth
Cover me in your love
boomie this is beautiful and spiritually moving!
Thanks for saying this Len, appreciate it. Hugs
Like, like, like, like, and like!
Thank you, thank you, thank you
Touching lines there, Beautiful.
Thank you for saying this, well appreciated
I love this one! I feel covered.
Great
, thanks Resa! Have a great week dear
this is just amazing. what a lovely prayer or request to a lover. the perfect in each case.
Indeed…I wrote it from two perspectives…to a lover was my original idea, and then after a few days, I read it again and saw it could be a prayer of some sorts to God. Glad you enjoyed it,thanks
i think true love is another form of worship and vice versa.
Beautiful write Boomiebol
Last two lines…. great way to end this!!
Thank you so much
Thw strength and the vulnerability of a woman.
So true
So romantic and strong all at once.
Thank you, I appreciate the kind comment
Something nice to strive for…
I agree
so nice. yes.
Thank you Stacy
You are a great poetress, Boomie. Well done.
I appreciate this very much. And you know I am a great fan of your work
Reblogged this on onlinefunland.
Thanks always
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This is a perfect poem. It works on every level because it is a prayer, a pleading for the essence of the human spirit to prevail. It also happens to read beautifully. Have you decided to read for us?
Thank you
. I still need to work on that right? lol, soon
Such submissive words. I love it.
Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it
I can feel the warmth in your words. Such beauty!
Thanks for saying so
This feels like a prayer to GOD and also like a poem to a lover.Its lovely. Good job
Thank you! Yea after I wrote it with from a lover’s perspective, I read it again and felt the prayer side of it…I embraced both views. Glad you saw it too