If I could, I would turn the tide of this bitter cold Gently breaking its back into many small unrecognizable fragments And slowly open the skies to the Sun, golden warm like your touch
Nov10
If I could, I would turn the tide of this bitter cold Gently breaking its back into many small unrecognizable fragments And slowly open the skies to the Sun, golden warm like your touch
Very nice and soothing
Thank you Bruce
That poem felt like a hug in words.
And a hug it is my friend. Hugs
Simple and sweet.
Thanks Lily
Sweet, sweet. I love it.
Thank you sir
These words of yours warmed me on this chilly, autumn morn.
I am most glad
. More warm hugs coming your way
The sun will come out on the morrow and bring some warmth! Hang in there!
Amen! We have no choice at this point lol
Meanwhile, enjoy the cold. Warm dinners feel warmer and taste better in such periods!
Great poem Boomie. The weather here has cooled in sunny San Diego as well. I loved Ste J’s comment above.
I guess the cold air is floating all around now. Today wasn’t so bad, it was in the 60s’
. Thanks as always, yea Ste J always has the nicest things to say
SWEEET!
sunshine in ink, my friend. Pure sunshine. And yes, I do feel hugged!
More warm hugs coming your way, sis
Feelin’ a warm hug here
Double for you twinnie
Ahhhh, I loved this!!
Thanks so much Christy
Enthralling and very apt! Love it:)
Thanks so much, very nice of you to say
Very, very awesome!!
You are darling divine
. I really appreciate this, and many thanks for the retweet. Hugs mon amie
I can see the scene unfolding … great use of descript, Boomie. not a word wasted.
Many thanks Ms. Stacy
HA! you are RIGHT! And Ban autumn….! And may I remind you………………………………………!…Lovely imagery by the way
Ha yes i so want to ban autumn and winter, my sinuses are acting up again, and its no fun. Thank you so much
I wish you could do this! I miss summer!
I know, me too. Getting too cold, and they say we might get snow tomorrow. I pray they are wrong
Brilliant, my sister.
Thanks Cestone
so well done
Many thanks!
Just enough words to make this write nice and sweet.
smiles in gratitude