The drip drop pitter patter
Of gentle falling rain
Plays like music
In her ears
The perfect soundtrack for
The comfort and warmth
She finds in love’s arms
Chocolate ice cream
And strawberry drippings
On kiss stained lips
Nov11
The drip drop pitter patter
Of gentle falling rain
Plays like music
In her ears
The perfect soundtrack for
The comfort and warmth
She finds in love’s arms
Chocolate ice cream
And strawberry drippings
On kiss stained lips
Niiiiiiiice – I’ll slow dance to that!
lalalala…that’s my idea of slow music lol…i am such a nerd. You are the best twinnie, the BEST.
Thanks so much for the retweet. Big hugs for a great night’s rest
Hugs back at you & sweet & pleasant dreams to you too.
xoxo
Thank you
Beautiful
Kim*
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Thank you Kim. Always nice to “see” you here
Oops, I almost forgot. Your poem is ALSO beautiful
Kim*
Big smiles
Aburo mi Bunmi, eleyi gbo no! Sis Boomi, this is hot! Me likes. Well crafted.
Hahaha… Thanks so much
Another sweet one
smiles, thanks so much
“Kiss stained lips”. Killer
Thanks so much Luke
I love the surprise in your last stanza.. a pretty metaphor.. xx
Thanks so much!
love it – agree with legion writer – kiss stained lips – very evocative
Thanks so much I am glad yo enjoyed this
Wonderful….i like…Orofiorentino
Thanks so much
Perfectly heavenly… I’m a sucker anytime you throw food into the mix, Boomie.
You know food just makes many of us glad lol. Thanks always Ms. Lily
Words of comfort and joy.
Big smiles, thanks much
Nice one, Boomie.
Very much appreciated Cestone
Wow… Love this… You made ice cream hot
Hehehe…thanks Susan
Ahh, yes – there’s nothing like gentle rain for a romantic mood
I agree
beautiful..first stanza is my favourite here:)
Thanks so much, and i appreciate this
Sheer bliss!
The magic of rain
. Thanks so much
Mummm! Rainy days and snuggling. Memories.
Sweet memories no doubt. The rain just makes a lot of feel all cuddly lol
What s story!
Smiles