Spoon fed by desire
Nourished by lust
Lavishly drunk on love
Satiation soon
Repeatedly reached
In phases
Joy brimming as
Fingers, fork, tongue, mouth, taste buds
feel, feed and sweet fill
Nourished to the brim
My essence is filled
Full lips wiped in happy delight
This poem was born from Noel Ihebuzor’s brilliant response to my poem; Untitled: Dinner. The second and third verses are by Noel, and the first and last were written by me. He does these duets so well, please check out his blog whenever you can for some more brilliant duets and poems. Thanks Noel, and thank you all.
Wow, this is great, guys!
This is all Noel
love the alliteration. very nice
Thanks so much Stacy
You’re making me hungry! “50 Shades” has nothing on you
Kim*
http://www.100days100ways.wordpress.com
hahaha, now if only i was as lucky as 50 shades writer lol. Thanks Kim
a match i fI ever read one the two of you do very well as a ‘duet’
smiles
Coucou Boomie,
Vous faites un très joli duo.
As-tu pensé à publier tes poèmes?
Merci ma chère. Je veux, mais je ne sais pas comment. Tu-as des idées?
Tu peux contacter des maisons d’édition, leur envoyer directement certains de tes poèmes; il y en a, surtout de petites maisons qui cherchent des auteurs.
Ca demande plus d’organisations mais tu peux aussi faire des lectures privées et surtout publiques, dans des parcs, des librairies, des bibliothèques…
Les concours peuvent être intéressants aussi pour te faire connître des éditeurs.
He complemented your piece perfectly. Very nice!
He is so good at those duet things
. Thanks always Lily
A lovely duet!
Thanks twinnie
An amazing duet Boomie.
Thanks so much. Noel really did this one
Wonderful boomie ~ love it
x R
Hugs Robyn
A beautiful duet, Boomie.
Thanks so much Uzoma
Reblogged this on visionvoiceandviews and commented:
Dinner for two
I think a lot of people enjoyed this dinner
. Thanks again
This was fun!
Yep
!
very nice and I get to like it twice, bonus
Smiles. Thanks Bruce…twice is nice
Nice one!
Thank you!
Oooh! What a feast
Yummy
Nice I love the food metaphor. I use it often.
Food has that potential lol. Thanks so much
This dinner certainly satiates the two most important senses, Boomie and Noel I think it is high time I paid a visit to Noel. Beautiful duet!
You should…his poems are poignant and very deep. And he does these duets so well
Ah! once more you describe so well the passion of youth, Boomie. Good writing…
Thank you so much