Jan6

Write A Poem With You In Mind

Posted on January 6, 2013 by boomiebol

I wonder if it would be OK if I asked for your name
After this one slow dance
So at night when all is quiet and dark
I can write a soft spoken poem with you in mind

A haiku or Tanka of sorts will be great for starts
But 5-7-5…with added syllables of 7-7 wouldn’t do
This brief moment of our souls meeting square
Holding a lifetime so intense and wildly bare

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chatwithme05@yahoo.com on January 6, 2013 at 9:31 pm said:

Hw ws d lace naa… U no sleep? God will do it 4 us…I av tod him, n he has assured me… So, am happy…..
Sent from my BlackBerry wireless device from MTN

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RoSy on January 6, 2013 at 9:35 pm said:

Oh – Love this!!!

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- boomiebol on January 6, 2013 at 9:35 pm said:
  
  Thanks twinnie .
  
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Roxi St. Clair on January 6, 2013 at 9:37 pm said:

Very nice!

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- boomiebol on January 6, 2013 at 9:38 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much
  
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elisaruland on January 6, 2013 at 9:47 pm said:

Ohhhhh. Your poem sent me spiraling back into time to one heady, sultry night on a dance floor. And for some reason when I think of the moment, it’s in black and white. Thanks for taking me there.

Elisa

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 6:04 pm said:
  
  Oh black and white are so beautiful I think . Thanks so much, your comment made me smile.
  
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Susan L Daniels on January 6, 2013 at 9:52 pm said:

Oh Boomie. Yes.

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 6:03 pm said:
  
  Susan thanks a mille
  
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Robyn Lee on January 6, 2013 at 11:14 pm said:

Really very cool — loved this boomie ~ poetry tech talk in the midst of romance – excellent! ~ R x

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 6:03 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much
  
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rgonaut on January 6, 2013 at 11:26 pm said:

My real name?

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 6:01 pm said:
  
  Whichever works
  
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booksdefineme on January 7, 2013 at 12:05 am said:

Beautiful Boomie! Thank you .

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 6:02 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much
  
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Noel Ihebuzor on January 7, 2013 at 12:51 am said:

wow, this is poetry!

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 6:02 pm said:
  
  You flatter your sister no doubt . Thank you!!!
  
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Church Johnson on January 7, 2013 at 2:08 am said:

Cool

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 3:45 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much
  
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ledrakenoir on January 7, 2013 at 4:19 am said:

Just so well written – you little word artist…

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 6:01 pm said:
  
  You come up with the nicest names for me . Thanks so much
  
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meiro on January 7, 2013 at 4:30 am said:

So lovely.

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 6:00 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much
  
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Scott Mitchell on January 7, 2013 at 7:21 am said:

The name is Mitchell; Scott Mitchell
Beautiful writing as always my friend. Have a blessed week

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 3:54 pm said:
  
  Said like a true gentleman . Thanks so much Mr. Mitchell…
  
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Books & Art - Spirit & Soul - Lesley Fletcher on January 7, 2013 at 7:36 am said:

I like this so much

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 6:00 pm said:
  
  I am most glad. Thanks much
  
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Madhu on January 7, 2013 at 8:24 am said:

Absolutely lovely Boomie, …every single word!

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 3:53 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much. You are always so gracious, very much appreciated
  
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kindredspirit23 on January 7, 2013 at 8:30 am said:

Very nice!
Scott

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 3:52 pm said:
  
  Thank you sir !
  
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readinpleasure on January 7, 2013 at 8:33 am said:

Beautifully soul-inspiring.

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 3:51 pm said:
  
  You say the kindest nicest things, thanks so much. God bless
  
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LuAnn on January 7, 2013 at 9:40 am said:

Beautifully intimate!

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 3:49 pm said:
  
  Thank you
  
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silentlyheardonce on January 7, 2013 at 3:50 pm said:

Love this.

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 6:00 pm said:
  
  I am very glad, thanks so much
  
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Don't Quote Lily on January 7, 2013 at 6:39 pm said:

Oh yeah, nice… Love it.

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 9:44 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much
  
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StacyMichelle on January 7, 2013 at 7:02 pm said:

this is so intimate, I found myself whispering while reading. I am loving this groove you are in

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- boomiebol on January 7, 2013 at 9:44 pm said:
  
  You are too kind Stacy, thanks so much
  
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Alarna Rose Gray on January 8, 2013 at 5:40 am said:

Love the part where it’s the souls that meet. Truly romantic, all of it

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- boomiebol on January 8, 2013 at 2:02 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much Alarna . Very nice of you to say
  
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jolynproject on January 14, 2013 at 11:52 am said:

I love this. That should be my pick up line. “Hey babe, what’s your name? I wanna write a poem for you boo.” lol

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- boomiebol on January 15, 2013 at 4:50 pm said:
  
  Lol I love it . Let me know how it goes lol. You are so kind Jolyn, thanks so much
  
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  - jolynproject on January 15, 2013 at 7:20 pm said:
    
    Surely will.
  - boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:10 pm said:

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