My heart is obese in its affection for you Fed full and pudgy by your late night hugs and sugar sweet kisses That one touch and fondled cuddle before Monday dawns With a yawn of resignation for life Juicy warmth bringing peace in a quick embrace One last see you soon at the door pumping more flesh To this heart's fat *Have a lovely week* This poem is a work in progress i think...
Jan7
Its progress as is sweetie!
Thanks so much
Love the line “With a yawn of resignation for life”…. very nicely written
Thanks so much for saying Roxi
I love the imagery of this poem!
I am very glad. Thanks so much
what a nice title and meaning.. you are amazing poet. I loved it dear Boomie, Thanks and Love, nia
Thank you so much Ms. Nia I really appreciate it
As it should be true love is a work in progress. Beautiful writing as always.
Thank you so much
I agree with Kim.
Thanks sis
This is a wonderful start. Like you, I feel there is more, but I do love the plump satisfaction of this
Thanks so much Susan
… Plump satisfaction I like very much…
I do love the start though….and I am sure I will enjoy the ending
Thank you so much… I will see what comes eventually
A heart that plump because it’s filled with love is a happy heart
You said it twinnie
. Thanks
‘My heart is obese in its affection for you’
Love it
Thank you
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Yes it is a work in progress … not the poem so much as the feelings engendered by the words. It seems there should be more even though there doesn’t need to be. I like that, a pleasant lingering!
Thank you so much
A heart fat with love, not cholesterol, very healthy…
I agree, very healthy…though there is still the probability of a heart attack lol. Thanks so much, and a wonderful and happy new year to you.
Always a pleasure to see you here