Jan8

The Kiss Of Your Death

Posted on January 8, 2013 by boomiebol

Poison and kisses

Your eyes are dead
And this kiss you now offer
I call the kiss of your death
A forced attempt at restoring nothing
Poison they are now to your own soul

My words like darts wait their turn to fight back
Rhythmically taking their lyrical time

You remain dazed in the moment
Unsure of the now new and stark reality

Silently choking on your paragraphs…

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Susan L Daniels on January 8, 2013 at 3:06 pm said:

Oh… I like this one. The rough side of Boomie.

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- boomiebol on January 8, 2013 at 3:31 pm said:
  
  I swear my muse is trying to start something lol… The things I have been writing lately lol…
  
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  - Susan L Daniels on January 8, 2013 at 3:32 pm said:
    
    Go with it, Boomie–she is leading you deeper.
  - Susan L Daniels on January 8, 2013 at 3:32 pm said:
    
    Hah–says the chick who wrote about pine needles and snow bread today. Go deeper, but with medication on hand
  - boomiebol on January 8, 2013 at 3:39 pm said:
    
    Haha… I just read it and my comment was on Yoruba something like yep deal with that lol
  - Susan L Daniels on January 8, 2013 at 3:41 pm said:
    
    Hahaha!
- boomiebol on January 8, 2013 at 3:32 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much
  
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Esenga' s Voice on January 8, 2013 at 3:15 pm said:

Wow, very different tones and colours! Love it, Boomie.

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- boomiebol on January 8, 2013 at 3:32 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much .
  
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Resa McConaghy on January 8, 2013 at 6:30 pm said:

A deadly, meaningful poem. I like it!

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- boomiebol on January 9, 2013 at 1:41 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much Resa
  
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TheOthers1 on January 8, 2013 at 6:45 pm said:

Rhythmically taking their lyrical time. I love that line.

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- boomiebol on January 9, 2013 at 1:42 pm said:
  
  Very nice of you to say, thanks so much
  
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readinpleasure on January 8, 2013 at 8:44 pm said:

This is strong and poignant.

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- boomiebol on January 9, 2013 at 1:42 pm said:
  
  Thanks sis
  
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Noel Ihebuzor on January 9, 2013 at 1:31 am said:

wow? na who make Sis vex like so?

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- boomiebol on January 9, 2013 at 1:42 pm said:
  
  haha, na just poem o lol
  
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- boomiebol on January 9, 2013 at 1:43 pm said:
  
  lol, just a poem really
  
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Seyi sandra on January 9, 2013 at 6:44 am said:

I like this, not sensual but like lady bond out for a slap! Good job sis!

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- boomiebol on January 9, 2013 at 1:43 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much
  
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Don't Quote Lily on January 9, 2013 at 9:35 am said:

Dark side. Loved this piece!

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- boomiebol on January 9, 2013 at 1:44 pm said:
  
  Thanks Lily
  
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halefire323 on January 9, 2013 at 10:39 am said:

I LOVE this piece!! It describes EXACTLY how I’ve been feeling lately, but couldn’t accurately describe. Thank you for sharing!

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- boomiebol on January 9, 2013 at 1:44 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much for reading, so glad you enjoyed it .
  
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kenthinksaloud on January 9, 2013 at 6:20 pm said:

ah I’ve missed your art Boomie – great to see something darker than usual. Wonderful as always

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- boomiebol on January 9, 2013 at 8:47 pm said:
  
  You are too kind Ken, thanks so much. Always a great pleasure to “see” you here
  
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LuAnn on January 11, 2013 at 6:30 pm said:

Someone better remind your man not to push your buttons!

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Subhan Zein on January 11, 2013 at 9:58 pm said:

My words like darts wait their turn to fight back
Rhythmically taking their lyrical time… ======= this is just………………………………………………………….

stupendous! Well done Boomiebol!

Subhan Zein

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Lori Lipsky on January 12, 2013 at 6:37 pm said:

Fine writing, Boomie. Well done!

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- boomiebol on January 12, 2013 at 8:13 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much
  
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kindredspirit23 on January 13, 2013 at 10:49 am said:

A bit scary, Boomie.
Scott

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- boomiebol on January 13, 2013 at 7:34 pm said:
  
  lol, thanks so much
  
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silentlyheardonce on January 19, 2013 at 9:56 am said:

Choking your paragraph!!! How so perfect!

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- boomiebol on January 20, 2013 at 9:04 pm said:
  
  Thank you
  
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