Jan14

The Things He Saw(What He Saw)

Posted on January 14, 2013 by boomiebol

He saw sunny summer in her stride
The warmth of June in her poised walk

He caught a glimpse of the golden sun reflecting off her trails
Her feet & footprints august on brown sandy beaches

He saw drops of spring in her tender eyes
Pops of yellow April and lilacs bright
Soft smile turned inward like dew drops of rain

He saw life in her soul
Love listed in adequate shades

The clear blue waters echoed her name
Teasingly calling her love...

*I can't decide on what I want or think the title should be  . 
Have a blessed and fulfilling week!*

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rheath40 on January 14, 2013 at 7:56 am said:

Maybe the spectrum he saw in her? Beautiful as always Boomie.

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:23 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much Renee.
  
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advocatemmmohan on January 14, 2013 at 7:59 am said:

tender touch poem. very nice
with regards
advocatemmmohan

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:24 pm said:
  
  Thank you sir
  
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littlemisswordy on January 14, 2013 at 8:03 am said:

Just beautiful!

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:14 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much
  
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yourothermotherhere on January 14, 2013 at 8:12 am said:

“Forever Summer”

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:24 pm said:
  
  Love it…summer is the best time in my opinion . Thank you so much
  
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Barbara Bamber | justasmidgen on January 14, 2013 at 8:21 am said:

I love this one best (I think I always say that:).. because it reminded me of an artist’s palette. Just beautiful.. xx

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:24 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much
  
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Seyi sandra on January 14, 2013 at 8:23 am said:

‘Just You’

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:25 pm said:
  
  Thank you
  
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readinpleasure on January 14, 2013 at 9:17 am said:

This is beautiful, Boomie. ‘The Things He Saw’ is just right.

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:25 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much Cestone
  
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frankoshanko on January 14, 2013 at 9:34 am said:

Sweet!

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:25 pm said:
  
  Thank you sir
  
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Jaz on January 14, 2013 at 10:08 am said:

I think “What He Saw” is a good title. Hey, you know what I would love? I took a friend’s poem and turned it into a song about 12 years ago. I haven’t produced it yet on video but the point is I love your writing do much I really would love it if you would write the lyrics to a song for me. Everything I write is melancholy. It would be nice to have some lyrics from a different perspective.

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:27 pm said:
  
  You humble me Ms. Jaz, i don’t know if i am a song writer lol…but if yo have a background music i can listen to, maybe i can come up with something you like…what do you think?
  
  So sorry for the late response…been a busy year thus far.
  
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  - Jaz on January 16, 2013 at 6:12 pm said:
    
    Not as of yet but when I do I will post something for you.
bulldogsturf on January 14, 2013 at 10:32 am said:

Lovely words … I’ve missed them….

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:27 pm said:
  
  Good to see you again sir, always a pleasure. Glad you like this
  
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utesmile on January 14, 2013 at 11:43 am said:

Beautiful and so loving! I like those very much!

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:28 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much
  
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russtowne on January 14, 2013 at 12:56 pm said:

I especially love your last two lines.

Russ

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:31 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much sir
  
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Don't Quote Lily on January 14, 2013 at 1:12 pm said:

Titleless or not, this is lovely!

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:31 pm said:
  
  You are so beautiful Lily, thanks so much
  
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mindfuldiary on January 14, 2013 at 1:22 pm said:

Beautiful! Have a great week too!

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:31 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much
  
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silentlyheardonce on January 14, 2013 at 3:32 pm said:

Nice as always. I like “What He Saw” I always like short and simple.

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:32 pm said:
  
  Thank you
  
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shawnrjones12 on January 14, 2013 at 6:48 pm said:

Loving this one, too! “He saw sunny summer in her stride” – What a great beginning! Pulls you right in!

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:32 pm said:
  
  Very nice of you to say, thank you
  
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nightlake on January 14, 2013 at 7:11 pm said:

beautiful..makes one feel so good after reading this

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:32 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much my friend
  
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muriellerites on January 14, 2013 at 7:36 pm said:

Glad you came by. Love your blog.

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:32 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much
  
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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:33 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much for stopping by
  
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RoSy on January 14, 2013 at 7:43 pm said:

Love all the suggestion titles.
I’m thinking Radiating Beauty.
No title needed though – the poems speaks beautifully without it.

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:33 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much twinnie
  
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kz on January 14, 2013 at 8:32 pm said:

this is very very lovely.. made me smile thanks

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:34 pm said:
  
  As did your comment, thanks so much kz
  
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adetokunbohr on January 16, 2013 at 5:13 am said:

This actually reminds me of Maya’s “I Rise.” Lovely work. As always.

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:10 pm said:
  
  Thank you sir…i have not read that…i will check it out.
  
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yerpirate on January 16, 2013 at 11:31 am said:

Very sincere words…and we do see like that…

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:34 pm said:
  
  Very nice of you to say, thanks so much
  
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simon7banks on January 16, 2013 at 12:14 pm said:

I think “What he Saw” is too obvious. That’s my approach. How about “He Saw Summer”?

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:19 pm said:
  
  Oh i like that…i always find that coming up with a title is the toughest part of it all for me…
  
  I like this very much, thanks so much .
  
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simon7banks on January 16, 2013 at 12:15 pm said:

Mind you, it sounds like a tongue-twister! Would be a good way of testing if someone was sober: “He Shaw Shummer”…

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 12:18 pm said:
  
  hahaha..that is so funny. I was never any good at those things
  
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LuAnn on January 16, 2013 at 8:26 pm said:

Absolutely lovely Boomie.

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- boomiebol on January 16, 2013 at 8:44 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much
  
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kindredspirit23 on January 18, 2013 at 3:08 pm said:

Title doesn’t matter; it’s the thought(s) that count(s).

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- boomiebol on January 20, 2013 at 9:03 pm said:
  
  Thank you sir
  
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Noel Ihebuzor on January 19, 2013 at 2:07 pm said:

Am always curious to know what the seen saw and felt in the process of being seen. Lovely poem, Boomie!

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- boomiebol on January 19, 2013 at 5:54 pm said:
  
  I know right…i bet it’s unique to each person. Thank you always
  
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