Poets& writers of poems are innocent to behold Imagination swirling and painting rainbows In their flustered minds Words are more than alphabets conjoined from preschool Syllables more than breaks and form Love is most definitely more than a four letter word Do not get them started on hate Their thoughts often deep and with intent Don’t be fooled however by their canvas of words Spilling butterflies cocoa socks& silver lines On a clear summer noon Innocence is far from their flustered creative minds *Post 500* Have a wonderful week friends, God bless*
Jan27
“Spilling butterflies cocoa socks & silver lines”…… brilliant line! Love this
Thank you so much
500th post – that’s wonderful!
Thank you so much always
This is brilliant!
Very very kind of you to say. Thanks so much
Very good! I smiled as I read,
Scott
As did i when i read this comment, thanks so much
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Lovely Boomie. Happy 500.
Thank you so much
Shhhhh! Don’t give away our secrets.
Congrats on your 500 post..
Hehe, lips are now sealed lol. Thank you so much Ms. Kim, I always smile when I hear from you or read your brilliant work
Congratulations on your 500th! I loved this…you have such a beautifully graceful…captivating way with words
You are most kind
. Thank you so very much, God bless
awesome achievement, Boomie!
Always delighted to see you here Ms. Stacy, thanks so much
Perfect 500th post. Love.
Thanks beautiful one
Nice Boomie, but to change the subject I have to ask — what did you feel when you reached the end of things fall apart and Okonkwo was found? I never saw that coming.
Lol…I was expecting this, and it was why I did not want to give anything away.
Did it change your overall view of the book? The truth is Okonkwo tried all his life not to be like his father, and some might argue that he succeeded but he was driven by pride, a dangerous thirst for power, respect, and recognition, and that became his undoing…sometimes in trying to run away from a life we are so afraid….we do things that indirectly lead us back to that life…You must also remember that Okonkwo was arrogant…a warrior, and in his eyes succumbing to the white man’s arrest was accepting them, rejecting the Igbo tradition, a weakness in his eyes…
No, I enjoyed this book immensely even with this twist. His fall was great indeed, but I did not see him as wholly evil. Instead I saw him as the archetype of the culture that once he fell had no hope of rallying.
It also drew a parallel to how Christianity works through the weak and humble instead of the exalted leaders.
It was indeed a great fall…pride can be a terrible thing. Sometimes culture, religion and things of that nature also can be a thin line to tread too…
Glad you enjoyed the book. Achebe is a fine writer
next up, number two…
nice
. i will see if i can find other good reads by Nigerian authors…if you don’t mind
not at all. As I read the second, I will be sure to ask a few questions.
Busted!
500 & counting…Woot, Woot!
woot woot, thanks twinnie
. Hugs and love for a great week
bless you Boomie, great poem, your words are always so…. well I cannot find just one word! but I love your poetry !You are a fine poet. Congrats on 500 posts
You are most kind, I really appreciate your support and encouragement.
Thanks a mille
Congrats my friend a wonderful accomplishment!!!
Thanks so much
Wonderful word play boomie. Excellent poem and congratulations on your 500th post. I wonder how many scrapes of paper, and bits of ideas scattered among your belongs (and in your head) there are that will contribute to your next 500! I do look forward to them, You are indeed my favorite poetress out there! Thank you for sharing your talent. Penny
It’s been such a pleasure knowing you via this forum. Thanks for always being so kind, and encouraging. I really appreciate the love
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Thanks always
Me too Boomie. I’ll probably be encouraging at the very least until I get a copy of your first book!
Congratulations on completing successful 500 posts.
All are beautiful pearls and inspiring thoughts.
all best wishes
with regards
advocatemmmohan
Thank you so much sir
Very well written and congratulations…
Thank you
Poets are a sneaky lot: saying one thing and meaning far more.
Great poem, Boomie, as usual. You have a wonderful way of expressing things.
Sneaky is the correct word. Thanks so much David
Hey, stop writing about me
Awesome post as always Boomie!
LOL. I will be left with no one to write about if I do that lol. Thanks always Scott
Aah we know that
Congratulations on the 500 Boomie!
Thank you so much
Impressive, Boomie. Congratulations dear.
Thanks sis
I love how I do get the visuals from your poem again, congratulations for the 500 posts! Have a beautiful week!
You too dear, thanks always so much
Congratulations on reaching 500 posts Boomie. Quite an achievement in itself apart fro the splendid writing. I am so pleased to have followed you up to this moment and seen all the wonderful contributions to the world of poetry that you make. Keep it up.
Always so nice to hear from you. Thanks always and so much for the very kind support.
God bless
Great words for 500th post! Congrats!
Thanks so very much
ooooh I love this, and it’s so true!
Thank you
Great lines!
Thank you ma
congrats Boomi..
Thanks dear
I LOVE this. Happy 500th. The last line *Innocence is far from their flustered creative minds* made me laugh.
Can i re-blog, pls?
Thanks so much! Oh please reblog retweet anything. You don’t ever have to ask me
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Thanks
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There are just such beautiful lines here! Another amazing work of art, Boomie!
Thank you so much Ms. Shawn. Always nice to get feedback from you