Shapely legs of summer rain walked slowly past the corridor of my icy heart soothing soft as satin silk on my smooth shaded skin my icy heart faded to null& roamed right into your 12o'clock arms of spring pretty pink petals dancing before my grey colored eyes your scented steps left a trail of scintillating rainbow
Feb2
The words you use are so vivid, and the imagery is beautiful. The title is a great example of this: “Shapely Legs of Summer Rain.” Once I read the title there’s no going back
I have to read the whole poem.
Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed this
So well written, lovely great word virtuoso…
Thanks so much
“soothing soft as satin silk on my smooth shaded skin”
Great line.
Scott
Very nice of you to say
lovely imagery
Thank you
Ahhh…Loving into a new season!
so sweet
awesome writing. I wanna walk into the arms of spring myself. Or, the arms of the Caribbean for a week or two
Wouldn’t that be nice
?!? Thanks Scott
love the title … & the alliteration in this Boomie.
Thanks so much Stacy
You painted a dream into my mind so clear with your words…i must get back to Hawaii soon! I love the poem my sister!
Thanks so much
. Hawaii sounds so good right about now
I feel you are taking your poetry to a new level Boomie. Your words provide such wonderful images.
Thank you so much