Write A Poem With You In Mind

I wonder if it would be OK if I asked for your name
After this one slow dance
So at night when all is quiet and dark
I can write a soft spoken poem with you in mind

A haiku or Tanka of sorts will be great for starts
But 5-7-5…with added syllables of 7-7 wouldn’t do
This brief moment of our souls meeting square
Holding a lifetime so intense and wildly bare

47 responses »

  1. Hw ws d lace naa… U no sleep? God will do it 4 us…I av tod him, n he has assured me… So, am happy…..
    Sent from my BlackBerry wireless device from MTN

  2. Ohhhhh. Your poem sent me spiraling back into time to one heady, sultry night on a dance floor. And for some reason when I think of the moment, it’s in black and white. Thanks for taking me there.


Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s